Journey Begins

First Flash Fiction story! This is for Day 2 of the FlashFicHive Challenge [@FlashFicHive, Twitter] for August. Feedback welcomed; I wrote this resembling a poetry format. Writing a story in one hundred words is truly a challenge, but I enjoyed it. (Not to worry: I am not giving up poetry. )

Journey Begins

First battle overcome.
Mika’s journey changed
Reinforced by colorless
Tones of gray unforseen
Along mountainside
Up to the citadel,
Now cold and abandoned.

Blooms withdrew into their
Dark slumber for the season.
“They didn’t believe you,”
She joked to herself.

Peril loomed.
They dared not wait.

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